bright graffiti

through the autumn hills
this freight

I’m not satisfied with this haiku, but it will do for now. Another draft began “street art gliding past our lonely crossing” but that was too awkward on the tongue. Plus I wanted the seasonal reference… though that ends up making the image seem rather redundant. Which redundancy I leaned into by positioning the haiku on the other track. Which may be entirely too cute.

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